It wasn't all that bad... Until she started farting...

I personally think it's too abstract, what I mean is, the story is good, but is being cut off because she just suddenly starts too bleed out of her eyes and dies, without a good reason.
If the story where to continue from the moment she saw what was happening, things would get more interesting, as maybe she would try to resolve the situation, or she would just go home and be traumatized by the event and have nightmares because of it, or she would encounter a new situation like the one she just saw. All three more interesting than her just dieing form looking at it.

The close-up shots and buildup were pretty good, but the story is just too boring. As revenge on blowing up the submarine they let the ship blow up, that's about it. You should make the story (although it doesn't have to be a long one and can still be good silent) more interesting.

I like the trippy feel of the game. But I was a bit disappointed it ended, only after the third lvl, because I felt like the real experience was just beginning to start. So 6 lvl's or so would be better.

On three of my browsers (brave, firefox and safari) I occasionally get an error after finishing a level, which especially sucks when you've just reached the final level...

I love her pose and the detailed background. The picture seems realistic, but like something I would never see in real life, at the same time.

I like how her face are three faces at once instead of two, which it is in the original.